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The sequel to Hydra at the Maiden's Village part 1, where the lovely Ranger Estril, the last uneaten member of her squad, must attempt to warn the sleeping village of Sweetpetal about a group of massive hydras set to feast upon the luscious maidens in residence, but she definitely has her work cut out for her!
This story does emphasize the digestion aspects of vore a bit more heavily than I usually do (still nothing 'graphic' though!), and as a result is likely a bit darker and harsher than my 'average'. But sometimes I can't resist the appeal of innocent elf-girls having a rough, rough time. And if you happen to appreciate that, let me know and I might do it more often!
I intended to have this 2nd part done WAY sooner, but if you read my journal updates, you'll know I've been a bit preoccupied and stressed out with stuff lately.
Anyway, enjoy!
This is part of a series following after Hydra at the Sacred Spring and Hydra at the Maiden's Temple, so if you enjoyed those this one is probably a winner too.
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Posted by DragonsFTW 1 month ago Report
Oh goodness, such a plethora of lovely elves once again mercilessly hunted and devoured! And I see there's plenty of opportunity for a sequel(s) in the future too. Looking forward to read what will unfold next.
Posted by PrinnyDood 4 weeks ago Report
Glad you liked it! I do confess to having a weakness for numerous, sexy elf-girls in situations of dire peril.
Yeah, the long-term plan is to do at least a few more installments in this series before a proper 'finale', though who knows when I'll get around to it at this point! xD
Posted by MightyMaw 1 month ago Report
Oh no, it sure would be such a shame if a big army of proud, strong elf women had to face down all those hungry hydras, and wind up filling their bellies :3
A really fun read Prinny, I for one am very much okay with the more "intense" digestion handling in this one. Great work with the description of very cramped tummies and bulging throats, as always. And the scene with the priestesses trying to trap the hydra was very fun and dynamic.
Posted by PrinnyDood 4 weeks ago Report
Oh, wouldn't that just be the most ironic of tragedies, if the sexy elf-women tasked with stopping the hydras, ended up feeding them instead! x3
But yeah, thanks! I had a feeling you'd be in favor if the higher emphasis on 'digestion adjacent' descriptions. I do occasionally like to try and mix in some 'normal' action with my vore-stories, so I'm happy you liked how that turned out too.
(And speaking of hydras, with your commission super-close to done, I might just accomplish a 'hat trick' with three hydra-stories in a row, though obviously the Triadi Sisters are a somewhat different flavor of hydra ;3)
Posted by alexanderrea7 1 month ago Report
Amazing. I could really visualise this. I don't think im good enough to draw this but elves are hot so maybe one day I'll think about it. I love the added digestion scenes - it would be great if you could expand these further since this is the greatest horror. It doesn't have to be graphic. I would imagine the majority would succumb soon since with the number of women and lack of oxygen they'd become unconscious fairly quickly. Though you did say the stomachs were designed.. would be good to know how they work.
Just a single story on the night in the stomach would be good. Would be good to know more about the lore of the hydra? What's this about a queen who designed the stomachs to be horrific and to transport the unfortunates to a hellish afterlife?
The description of women being taken in their beds reminded me of a scene in lord of the rings where the nazgul attack the empty beds where the hobbits were originally staying.
This was on the whole very well written and had some very beautiful and poetic parts 'Every sensitive inch of their beautiful, defenseless bodies was slathered in hot, gushing digestive slime, every moment of breathless helplessness a thousand eternities of perfect, unequivocal hell.'
I really like the fact that Estril was left alive... honestly she needs to go through hell and probably see everyone including her queen eaten. It's refreshing to see someone survive though I'm usually one who just wants all the hot ladies eaten.
The Rimmi and Xalla part was really good and one of the highlights-- I liked they ended up together. It would be really sweet if also maybe the ladies eaten in a hydra's stomach are transported together to the hellish domain. It would mean that Rimmmi and Xalla could end up together (I would be kind and at least allow them a night of passion in the afterlife). Since if you know that you are going to end up digested for eternity and lose your soul (disappear into oblivion?) then I would also want to go out with a bang!
I have my own worm vore world story (well its more like a history with a mythological worm legends). There's a hydra worm like species too. https://aryion.com/g4/view/994332
Let me know what you think.
At present I'm focused on colouring a snake vore comic so that will be coming page by page once I've done it.
Posted by PrinnyDood 4 weeks ago Report
Thanks, glad you liked it so well! :D
Well, anyone who wants to illustrate/ fan-fiction anything about my creations is welcome to, though no pressure/obligation either way. Totally has my 100% blessing if you ever feel like it.
I'm glad you're curious about the lore! When/if I manage to finish any of the prospective sequels, there will be further stuff about the nature of the hydras, their origins and the (alleged) evil queen/goddess who (allegedly) created them to torment elven maidens with cruel digestions and an (alleged) crueler afterlife. Allegedly.
Yeah, I'm usually also in favor of all the sexy women being devoured, but I also like to keep a bit of uncertainty and tension, so sometimes the 'prey' does managed to elude digestion, at least for the time being.
Rimmi and Xalla will most certainly be together in whatever afterlife they end up in . . . and technically, they did already get one VERY intense night 'together', even if it wasn't how they expected. xD
Posted by Nalzindar 1 month ago Report
As with your previous hydra stories, this one was fantastic and I enjoyed it from start to finish :D
There's something primeval and fascinating about snakes as dangerous predators, though few have come close to these in size and might! Seeing the hydras sneak into the homes of elevs and gobble them up in their sleep was fun and interesting since most you have written about tend to try to flee.
It surprised me that Estril got away, but I certainly won't complain, I hope you intend to keep her, because it is interesting to see what happens from a recurring character's point of view! What more, unlike most of your victims who usually have it coming and/or are completely helpless, Estril is able to come up with creative plans.
As for poor Vlouha, I had almost thought she would escape too because I didn't think the hydra would be clever enough to investigate the ice. It surprise me a little since snakes tends to avoid cold and get slower when it gets cold. Nevertheless, she was eaten, but the priestess gets a thumbs up for having the second best plan^^
I'm looking forward to see what happens next time the hydra and its offspring appears : )
Posted by alexanderrea7 4 weeks ago Report
I know she was kind of sapped magic wise buti had an kdea. Vlouha if she was at full powers maybe could have allowed herself to be eaten and then frozen the guts of the hydra from the inside (unless the stomach is magically sealed or protected). Freezing ones stomach might do the hydra some permanent damage. I felt sorry for her though but at the same time it was comical she was caught.
Posted by PrinnyDood 4 weeks ago Report
That's an interesting angle, but it might be tough to concentrate on doing magic whilst inside a hydra's stomach.
But freezing their insides would be pretty harmful even to something so resilient . . . They regenerate, but frozen guts would REALLY suck, especially if they were frozen for any length of time, so at the very least, could cause severe debilitation. A Hydra with enough stomach damage it couldn't eat for an extended time would be VERY grouchy. xD
Posted by PrinnyDood 4 weeks ago Report
Thanks!
Yeah, I really like the 'serpent style' hydra I'm using for these, though the multi-headed lizard version also has it's appeal. I think it makes them more plausibly stealthy, despite their massive size, and like you say, them sneaking in and devouring the elf-girls in their sleep was a fun variation from my 'typical' scenes.
Well, I do like to keep at least a bit of tension and uncertainty, because the 'designated prey' characters DO sometimes get away. Estril will certainly be back, when/if I ever get around to continuing this 'saga'. :D
Vlouha was pretty clever . . . too bad for her she made too delicious a Popsicle to resist! xD These hydras are animal in intelligence . . . but VERY clever animals. So the hydra probably glimpsed her vanishing into the ice, and then once all the easy treats were eaten, decided to investigate that spot. If she had been under thicker ice, it probably would have eventually lost interest and given up.
Posted by Forstand 2 weeks ago Report
Great story! I really like the way the POV sticks with Vlounha while she's in the monster's belly, so that we get more description of what it's like in there. The extra description of their impending digestion was also lovely and I would welcome more of it in the future :) Overall excellent story! Bravo!
Posted by PrinnyDood 2 weeks ago Report
Thank you very much!
This series specifically is one I've been indulging in more emphasis upon internal POVs and impending digestion, so I'm very pleased you liked the themes!