ABOUT YOU:Your name: KavenBach or K-Bach.
Your writing library URL(s): Drawing and writing both:
http://aryion.com/g3/showgallery.php?id=69962Have you read the rules and guidelines, and do you agree to them? En effet.
Have you proofread your own story? Yes. Re-read it this morning with last-minute changes added. Mostly word changes to avoid repetitivenessivity.
YOUR POST:Title/Summary: "
Ambassadors of the Flesh Part Two: Meating the council." The ambassadors from Amazoria are led to the palace to meet the ruling grenoil council. Once there, clothing and restraint become superfluous due to the grenoil pheromones in the air. "First contact" between the two countries takes on a whole new meaning.
Word Count: Just shy of 10,000 words... 9,948 I believe, if ya wanna be that picky.
If you read to the asterisks/page break it's a little over 6,000 words, and you get to avoid the limited cooking/carving scene at the end, but you miss the only detailed vore of the chapter as well.
Rating and Classification: Multiple references to Frogman/human woman vore. Multiple refeences to pheromone-enduced lust. Frogman-woman/human woman semi-molestation sex, lots of peripheral frogman/human woman sex, and one detailed frogman/human woman vore instance. Also a post-cooking scene of human women as roasts, and the carving of their meat for consumption.
Type of Critique Preferred: Say whatever you feel you should. If you see a honking huge logic error in there, please say so; I seem to make an awful lot of those. If you see something and feel it's worthy of mention, then by all means mention it.
Questions for readers: Is it descriptive enough? Too descriptive? As in, too much peripheral exposition before the action? Should the female grenoils, the grenoelles, be given far more attention (stupid question: everyone or just about prefers female preds)? Is there anything I should add, or missed, whatever?
YOUR READING LIST:Rating and Classification Preferred: I think I'm pretty much screwed this month. I don't want to read M/M, Scat, Furry, or underage works. Even F/? is getting tedious to me (granted, I've been in a stressed-out mood for months now). I'll probably end up reading whatever I'm assigned anyway, though I can't guarantee an in-depth review if it really doesn't appeal to me. My preference is M/F or ?/F in case that matters.
Critiquing Style: I'll be honest, and I may be harsh at times... I try not to be but I've found it depends on my mood. If the spelling is bad, that's a MAJOR pet peeve of mine and I'll say in no uncertain terms that you need to learn to spell. If I come across witty turns of phrase and I find the concepts and plot creative, I'll express my appreciation of such. I will often notice and pick out logic flaws if I see them. I try to temper my responses.
Don't forget to attach your writing!Yep:
http://aryion.com/g3/showitem.php?id=176304...and if you want to read or re-read chapter one:
http://aryion.com/g3/showitem.php?id=176185Have a good month folks!